Heather:

I like this. She's managed to capture young Saavik, who gives no quarter whatsoever, not to mention so many details of Saavik and Ajeya. Saavik demanding both the food and the information,Ajeya and Saavik are connected the stars, how Saavik never failed a test, and I really liked the part where Ajeya recognized T'Pren. And the issues Ajeya is having, only not quite realizing she's having about everything. I think this story was really well-done and gave us a wonderful perspective of the Hellguard days. Very nice!

mzsnaz:

A very well written story, Eowyn! The last chapter, in particular, was emotional and strong, with the Vulcan male's despair at his part in the experiment, Ajeya's rejection, and Saavik's pain at that rejection and lack of love. It was all excellent, but the ending wrapped up the sad tale quite well.