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Eowyn:

I want to get the second part soon! This is very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens when Valeris and Rrelthiz collide.

Jennifer:

I just got a chance to read this. Excellent first section, right? You did say this was part of a threesome? YOu better be typing on the second one now!

I love how these two humans are so concerned about someone who has shown on more than one occasion just how capable of caring for herself that she is!

I like that Rhel is coming to back them up and that it's a surprise. I wonder will they be on the same shuttle and just how nervous Valeris will be!

More!

Joanna:

I like that her friends are so protective of her, and the scenario that they are watching her in the shuttle bay and talking about her well-being behind her back :)

mzsnaz:

What a great story! I loved the way Hunter and Stuart try to get the real scoop on Valeris from those who know Saavik best. Are you close to having the second part done? (greedy smile)

Heather:

I've got mixed emotions here. One, I'm glad Saavik has shipmates looking out for her. However, Marla likes Valeris. Marla models herself after Valeris. Which means ... nothing bad's going to happen in this fic and Saavik will still think VAleris is okay.

Unless Marla suprises me

Marla: Surprise me. :)

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