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Kerry:
- I so love that Eowyn gave us Saavik's thoughts during a time that we don't see her in the book! I've always imagined what this time was like for her, and for both of them when Spock finally makes it home, but both so unconscious, Sarek fears they can't be drawn out of their comas.
Joanna:
- It's really good, eowyn. And in your second language too, wow!
> For there were things more important than our lives. -> I like this last line. It echoes the Vulcan sense of duty.
> And to you I cling. <- last line is good, like he is her lifeline
> /Spock/. -> can sense the desperation as she reaches out with her mind for him
mzsnaz:
- Nicely done! Poetry can be quite difficult to do, but you did a great job, Eowyn!
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