10Blue10:

This is so sweet, and well written too. Have a cyberman - I mean hug

AnnaGandalf:

Loved it, so many feels

Keep writing. :-)

xx

SonicTeamCE:

THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL *cries* Especially loved "their first stars" and the idea of Melody mimicking the mobile herself. Awwww!

betawho:

Aww, you made me bawl, that was so lovely.

Jakie (ladygj):

Just read this for the first time. I think it's wonderful! ♥ Beautiful piece. The cot, the moments between them, River's memories, everything was perfect. I lack the words to explain how I feel.

Stream Harmony:

I love this story! How the Doctor helps her remember. It's sweet and beautifully written! Keep on inspiring!

whovianwrites:

This is so sweet!

kaffyr:

This is beautifully done, with a great deal of emotional acuity. You make baby Melody's memories completely believable, you make the tool of her being able to remember a completely valid story hook, and ... and this brought tears to my eyes, because it has everyone I love in it: the Doctor, Amy, Rory, River and the TARDIS. Thank you so much for writing this!

dozmuffinxc:

I am trying desperately not to cry - and very nearly failing! What a beautiful piece of writing, and what a perfect "missing scene" to take on! Lord, I love these sort of fics. You've written both River and the Doctor so very well. Thank you for sharing this with us!

akkajemo:

What a brilliantly written moment. The way the Doctor choses to prompt River's memory, to do this for both of them, the way they tenderly share this, yet she cannot resist flirting and flirt-mocking him all the while, and then your wonderful description of Baby Melody's perception, feelings and most of all her love for the four most important beings in her life - her parents, the Doctor and the TARDIS. Until you tie it all into a bow by having the Doctor give River the clear instruction on how to guard this until the events of Demon's Run played out... This is a beautiful and superb story, I'm so grateful you shared it. Thank you.

akkajemo:

What a brilliantly written moment. The way the Doctor choses to prompt River's memory, to do this for both of them, the way they tenderly share this, yet she cannot resist flirting and flirt-mocking him all the while, and then your wonderful description of Baby Melody's perception, feelings and most of all her love for the four most important beings in her life - her parents, the Doctor and the TARDIS. Until you tie it all into a bow by having the Doctor give River the clear instruction on how to guard this until the events of Demon's Run played out... This is a beautiful and superb story, I'm so grateful you shared it. Thank you.

honeynoir:

Ooh, this is fascinating! Love the several versions of River and Eleven still not knowing himself fully, and baby Melody's perspective has to be totally unique! And Golden-Blue Mummy! <3

JaneScarlett:

Love it love it love it!!!! His helping her uncover the memories and Melody' s impressions. This was so brilliant!